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Angle with broken wings

Posted Tue, 09/28/2010 - 07:33 by Hobostubs
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That lick at 2:44 onwards is

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by jodanchudan - 10/03/2010 - 12:44

That lick at 2:44 onwards is really cool - you could bring that in earlier and make it the main theme of the piece, varying it and using hand effects. The cigar box guitar is a great sound too - I think I'd try making one if I wasn't so hopeless at any kind of craft or DIY stuff!

thanks

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by Hobostubs - 10/04/2010 - 09:58

thanks jodanchudanat 2:44 is where i liked it also but befor thats kind of hit and miss more miss;-) about 90% of my songs are done on the 1st take maybe second on all the instruments,i end up with good and bad parts alot;-)

thanks

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by Hobostubs - 10/02/2010 - 20:24

,I will check out the tone info, .thanks for the advise

Not being a guitar player I

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by hank stefaniak - 10/01/2010 - 19:41

Not being a guitar player I find it hard to comment. You have a very 'authentic' sound with your guitar set up. The harp comping has some good ideas and yeah I agree, you could have come in earlier with the harp. I'd recommend you look at the info on tone. It sounds like the notes are 'pinched' and I think if you dropped your jaw more (bigger mouth cavity) it would make a big difference. Solid and consistent rhythm and cool vocals.